Friday, March 20, 2015

Twist Of Fate Chapter 5

Bonjour everyone! I hope you are still interested in my wounded hockey player's fate. If you have gone so far, I now need your honest opinion on my writing style. I had very kind and encouraging comments on my English and recently on my vocabulary. Now I need to know if you are comfortable with Matt sometimes interacting with you? Thinking out loud? Cursing in French Canadian? As I am writing in the first person, I found it interesting and original that my hero could involve the readers. Are you OK with that liberty or does it sound weird or annoying to you?  Waiting for your reviews, (good and bad!), here is Chapter 5

6 comments:

  1. I love that you write from his point of view. Please continue to do so :)

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  2. I love your writing, French Canadian and all! Go on!

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  3. Sounds encouraging! Thank you all

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  4. Doing a good job and I love Matt!

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