Thursday, May 19, 2016

For The Love Of Not Walking Chapter 4

Hi Blog readers, here is the next installment of FTLONW Chapter 4. I have to tell you though that I am feeling a little insecure about posting the continuation of the story because I know it is different. It is kind of a mystery, which people may feel weird about. I get the feeling that most readers want more devy stuff, which comes in different ways for everyone. I know even with TAC you guys had to be patient to get some sex scenes. I have this story pretty much finished and there is a lot more to come if you want it. Plummeting reader hits and only two comments for the last chapter are not helping my doubts about this story though. I seriously need to know who actually wants to keep reading this, because if it doesn't really fit into the Blog I may take it out. I know I don't post any comments on anyone's stories because I don't read any other stories on here, but I am certain some of them are just awesome. The reason for me not reading other stories is my strong insecurity about my own writing. Anyways, enough of my whining I guess. I thank the readers who have commented so far, I try to feed of that and tell myself that someone may enjoy the story and it is worth to keep posting but I guess I was a bit discouraged last time. Thanks to everyone who cares and enjoys the story and I hope this chapter will keep you interested how things develop for my protagonist. Please let me know sometimes though. I appreciate all of you. Hugs, yours dearly, Dani

13 comments:

  1. Dani I don't always get a chance to comment but I always look forward to your stories.

    What's happening to the main character reminds me of the show Supernatural. I'm always intrigued. I enjoy the devvy stuff but I like hearing the descriptions of his body and and what not.

    Keep going and don't remove your story. It's always a treat to go back and see everything you've written.

    Like I said once I originally thought it was the one shot you wrote of the para with the hooker for his bday. But this has more depth

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    1. Thanks so much for your feedback. I am so glad you like the mystery surrounding my main character right now. I guess I need to think of a sequel to my short story "Happy Birthday"...

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  2. Dear Dani, please keep on posting this story. I love mysteries and a mystery story with a cute paraplegic is like a dream come true! I can't wait to see where this is heading. You have me completely hooked! So looking forward to the next chapter!

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    1. I am relieved you enjoy the story, thank you for letting me know. It is a bit of a mystery but I will try everything to not disappoint with the cute para...

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  3. I am always sooo looking forward to your story. But I am mostly not commenting because I am a bit insecure about my English. It is difficult for me after reading such great stories to put everything I would love to say in an English comment... so I have a reason for being insecure.
    You on the other hand really don't need to be insecure with your great writing. I loved NSA,TAC and i love your story now. Please keep writing and posting!

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    1. You have nothing to worry about with your English, you "sound" like English is your native tongue...Thanks so much for enjoying this story and I am especially happy you have been with "me" for my other stories. You know my native language is not English either...I think we are doing all right though...:-)

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  4. Oh please keep posting! I am enjoying this story, and don't worry about certain scenes popping up often enough for everybody! Everything in its own time! I just started writing, and I too am facing some of the same insecurities! The story will come to you in its own time in the way it needs to be told! I'm sitting in the dentist's office right now and have a second while the numbing is taking place to write a quick blur here, but I promise I intend to read and comment later!! *hugs*

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    1. Thanks lu5, I appreciate your feedback. I do worry about the way my stories develop slowly but then again I think to myself, oh well...I just write to however my imagination leads me and hopefully some people will come along for the ride. Wishing you all the best with your writing endeavors and hopefully the dentist wasn't too bad...

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    2. I really think it might help if you do read other people's stories, because it will give you a better sense about your writing, it will help you to see that you are not the only one who doesn't jump into straight devvy-land, show support for those you are asking to support you and heck, maybe it'll push a few devvy buttons or even inspire something new! I hope you've gotten the feedback you've needed to continue on, because it is a good story, and your writing style is distinct.

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    3. Thanks lu5, but I just can't do it for some reason...yep, I am kind of insecure and I am almost certain it would discourage me if I would see other people's writing, and I want to stay true to myself and just write from my heart and not have doubts arise when I see what other people write. Thanks again though

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    4. Oh, okay. Well, hugs to you and know that I support you! :)

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  5. I suck at commenting but I really love this story!! Please keep posting!

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    1. That's all I need to know and thanks so much for reading. I appreciate every little comment...

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