Thursday, January 19, 2017

New Beginnings - Chapter 2

Hello readers,
Thursday again and I'm back with another chapter of my new story. First off I want to thank the readers who commented, it really means a lot to me.

I must admit I was hoping for more people to give me feedback since this was a first chapter of a brand new story and I am still nervous about it. Because the story is different for me in its POV, the characters, the setting, a mixture of reality, fiction, and fantasy and everything else, I would have liked to see what people actually think. I keep thinking "Oh God, I hope this will go over well"... I try to focus on the number of "hits" and just hope people like what they are reading but it's difficult with the "invisibility"...

I don't know about other writers, but putting a story on here takes courage for me, I'm nervous every week when I finally feel the chapter is ready and I dread overseeing mistakes or something in the story line that would be dumb. I sometimes reread and edit even after I post.

My last story was strange too with the whole nightly ordeals that my character went through and I was always worried that the story was too out there. I feel the same with this one and I sure hope "it will go over well." I wish I would have more confidence but I just don't have it. At the same time I want to share my writing with people who "get" it.

Anyways, enough about my insecurities. I really and truly hope you do like what you are reading and don't feel that it's dumb. I'm assuming the one's who read but don't comment still like it. Thank you for taking the time and for your interest.
I give you a somewhat lengthy Chapter 2 of New Beginnings and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for reading.
Hugs, Dani

9 comments:

  1. Dani don't worry. Keep posting. It's always great to see updates. I always look forward to what you post.

    We've all gone through different dev stages in our life - where interests and fantasies have changed and evolved. And I love reading all dev stories for that reason

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    1. Thanks for commenting Jess...glad you like it. For all authors here in this little corner of a different kind of stories it's good to know that someone reads and likes their stories.

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  3. We love it. Don't stop.

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    1. No, no I won't stop :-) It's just nice to get feedback...thanks for reading and commenting

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  4. Dani, like always your stories are great!!! Thank you for sharing them with us. I dont always comment, but I always read!!!

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    1. I am happy to hear that, means a lot. Thanks for commenting

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  5. Not sure why my previous posting did not post . . .

    Just wanted to say how much I love the interaction between your characters! They have a special chemistry. Great story.

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    1. Thanks Pepper, I always am happy to see you comment. Hope you will enjoy the story

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