Monday, September 2, 2019

New Chapter "What It Was"

Hi friends,
I hope everyone had a wonderful week and that it didn't take too long for Monday to come around. It seems always to come quick for me when I have to edit a chapter and be ready to post for you.
I am thankful for everyone reading this story and I loved your comments so much. On all the chapters you have made me so happy with your numerous heartfelt comments.
I know this is another rough one but that is just the way I like to write. Shay and Jordan have definitely connected way too much than to be without each other anymore and it won't be easy. I will reveal more on Jordan and his struggles and also on Shay and how Jordan unlocks a side in her she has tried to ignore all her life.
I give you another chapter of "What It Was" Chapter 8
Enjoy and as always I welcome your feedback. Have a wonderful first week of September.
Hugs, Dani

10 comments:

  1. I'm new to the site and this was the first fiction I read - the first 7 chapters over 2 days. I got up this holiday Monday wondering if another installment would appear and was happy to see that was the case. It's a great story and I had a tear in my eye by the end. Can't wait to see where it goes. Best regards, Timm

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    1. Thank you so much for your sweet comment Timm. I hope you will find lots of great stories here that touch you. I am glad you like this story and I hope you will keep coming back.

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  2. First off, my English skills are quite low, but I finally have to tell Dani, how much I love her stories and how hard it is, to wait for a new chapter, although time usually goes by quickly ... !

    Thank you so much Dani, for all the time, work and love you put into your stories to entertain us !

    My favourite are still Shane and Jessy an their story, but I am hoping Jordan will get and accept a lot of help and love from Shay ... !

    I am looking so forward to read more !

    All the best and lots of Love !

    PS. Do you sell copies of your stories, too ?
    I never copy them here, out of respect, but I recently made the experience, that another site like Paradevo closed, and now I lost an ongoing story, I also liked a lot ...
    Since I do not know any authors name or mail-address, unfortunately I have no chance to reach out to one of them, if I can't find/read a story anymore ...

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    1. Hi Sonja, nice to meet you. I am so happy to read your wonderful feedback. Thank you so, so much. I am also happy that you like "Three's a Crowd" so much.
      I am sorry you lost a story on another site. I have not published any of my stories yet, I unfortunately don't know anything about self publishing. I will try to find time to maybe look at self publishing. Or maybe I will start my own Blog. But for now you will always find me and my stories here. Thank you so much for reading.

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  3. Oh, I just realized, I mixed up Shawn and Shane, because I like both guys a whole lot ;) !

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    1. That's okay 😁, I also like them both 😉

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    2. ...and I also liked Jesse, Shawn's brother a lot...😉

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  4. Awww, I shouldn't talk about guys "here", without looking back at the story ... :) !

    But I really like Shawn, Jesse (und Trish) a lot !

    I don't know if amazon is "a fair partner" for an author, but I like to buy the stories there, even if I have already read them here, to have the chance to keep them, like other e-books, and to pay the little amount of money, so the author also gets a little "present" !

    And I saw, the author of the story I miss, was/is also a member of the paradevo message board, I have no access to and do not even know peoples first name.

    So I guessed, you might be "this author", too - but I also realized too late, that you already said, you have published all of your stories here, so this can not be the case !

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    1. Sonja, if you want to email me, here is my email

      Torninbetweenseit71@gmail.com

      If you are not a member on PD, I can possibly contact the "author" if you want. I am on PD and use the same name "Dani"
      I will definitely try to look at self publishing so my readers can have the stories. Thank you so much

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    2. Oh, Dani, that's really kind of you, that you are even offering to help me !
      I will message you. Thank you in advance.
      After reading your mail-address, I "assume", we might speak the same native language, so maybe there is a chance, that you don't have to deal with my (unfortunately) bad English anymore ;) !

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