Friday, March 27, 2015

Twist Of Fate Chapter 6

Here is a loooong Chapter 6 which I couldn't split in two due to the intimacy of the moment. Enjoy and comment!

New moderator wanted

We've gotten a lot of requests from new authors lately to participate in the stories blog, which is a great thing for everyone. The only problem is that it can be a little confusing to learn the rules of posting, and I just don't have time to direct every single new author.  I feel bad when I don't approve requests quickly, or am impatient when somebody doesn't understand what to do right away.

I'm looking for somebody who might be able to step up and be a moderator for the stories blog. Your job would be to help new authors learn how to post their stories, make a table contents, and fix any problems that arise in the posting process.

You don't have to be an author on the blog, but you have to be at least relatively tech savvy, familiar with Google blogger, and you have to have enough time to do this. If I ask you to help an author, it can't take you a week to get back to them.  You've got to be able to check the blog daily.

Any takers for this glamorous position?

Email me at paradevo@yahoo.com

Thursday, March 26, 2015

Three's A Crowd Chapter 17

Hello my friends, here is Chapter 17 of TAC.
I debated about posting this week, the blog is busy this week with lots of great stuff to read and catch up. I almost deleted a big part of the chapter for this week. I wrote this a couple of years ago and now when I go over it and edit I think about it very critical and debate if it is a good chapter the way I wrote it initially. I decided to leave it the way I wrote it initially and I hope it is all right and that you, my readers, enjoy the story still. Let me know what you think, I appreciate your reading my story. Hugs, Dani

Wednesday, March 25, 2015

PLD Update

Hi everybody!

Well, here it is: the FINAL update of Parking Lot Desperation. WOW. To write that is to really write something big. I've never finished a story before so this is an exciting day for me, guys. And it would never have gotten here without all of your support here on this fiction blog. For three years you guys have been paitent, encouraging, critical, and supportive and I seriously love you all so much for it. Thank you for everything -- but most importantly for reading.

I really hope you enjoy this last bit of Keeley and Clay. :)

Much love,
EJ

Also, here's an updated Table of Contents too.

Friday, March 20, 2015

Symphony

Hello!  I'm Shannon, and I've finally gathered up the courage to post a story of my own.  I hope you enjoy this first chapter!


Symphony - Chapter One

          Clumsiness was one of Brenna Hamilton’s defining traits.  In fact, she could have been the poster child for being awkward.  Luke used to take great pleasure in pointing out how easily she would trip over nothing more than air on flat ground.  So on this night, when it was absolutely essential that she be elegant and poised, she wasn’t the least bit surprised when she stumbled spectacularly over her own feet on the short walk to center stage.  It didn’t help that she had chosen to wear a tight strapless black gown that made breathing difficult, but being the featured soloist with the Wildehaven Symphony Orchestra was a big deal.  She was going to dress the part, damn it.

Twist Of Fate Chapter 5

Bonjour everyone! I hope you are still interested in my wounded hockey player's fate. If you have gone so far, I now need your honest opinion on my writing style. I had very kind and encouraging comments on my English and recently on my vocabulary. Now I need to know if you are comfortable with Matt sometimes interacting with you? Thinking out loud? Cursing in French Canadian? As I am writing in the first person, I found it interesting and original that my hero could involve the readers. Are you OK with that liberty or does it sound weird or annoying to you?  Waiting for your reviews, (good and bad!), here is Chapter 5

Wednesday, March 18, 2015

Three's A Crowd Chapter 16

Hello reading friends, here is Chapter 16 of TAC. I want to thank you for all your comments on last weeks entries. It means a lot to me, because I do doubt myself lots of times. Writing helps me with my being a devotee and it is really my only outlet, so being here and doing this is my medicine.
In this weeks chapter, the night after the disaster evening brings Trish and Shawn closer with some intimate moments and conversations. I am glad you are o.k. with the slow progress of the story and hope you will stick around for more to come. I appreciate all your feedback and comments so very much and hope you will enjoy this new chapter. Thank you and Hugs, Dani
Table of Contents: TOC

Friday, March 13, 2015

Twist Of Fate Chapter 4


First of all I want to thank my supporters again for their enthusiastic comments. It means a lot to me as it is my first attempt to write in English. Obviously you want to know more about Matt’s twists and turns, so here is Chapter 4

Wednesday, March 11, 2015

Three's A Crowd Chapter 15

Hello my reading friends, another week has gone by and here is Chapter 15 of TAC. This is another somewhat long chapter and it took me some time to edit and read over it again and again. I changed some things and I found mistakes I corrected but lately I have also been pondering in my thoughts if my story may be getting boring to some since I don't really have any sexual scenes in it so far. I guess I am a little in a self doubt phase about my writing abilities. I just wanted to point out once again the time line Trish and Shawn are in has really only been a few days and I like to write about the challenges they face with each other, Shawn's insecurity issues and Trish's guilt feelings. Those things can 't be wiped away in a few days of living together. They are coming closer to each other though and are trying to overcome those emotional obstacles they put in between themselves. I hope you are enjoying the story thus far even without sex :-) and I am thankful for you reading and letting me know how you like it. You mean a lot to me, Hugs, Dani
Table of Contents: TOC

Monday, March 9, 2015

Laws of Love update!

I wasn't going to write another chapter of the story because it was just so hard. But I have to say, the comments definitely motivated me. So here's part two.  I hope you like it!


(And here's Part 1)

Friday, March 6, 2015

Twist Of Fate Chapter 3

To my faithful readers, I hope you all enjoyed the beginning of Matthew's story. Please don't hesitate to give me your reviews and critics (and correct my mistakes!) Here is Chapter 3 which starts with an awkward encounter for Matt.

Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Three's A Crowd Chapter 14

Hi everyone, here is Chapter 14 of TAC. It is surely getting busy again on the Blog with lots of interesting stories. Trish and Shawn are only slowly inching closer to each other, still trying to figure out how the other feels. Especially for Shawn letting his guard down some more and telling Trish how he really feels is a challenge. Don't give up on him or Trish though because deep inside they both know what they really want and need. Hope you enjoy this week's chapter and let me know if you feel like it. Thanks for reading, Hugs, Dani
Here is also the Table of Contents:
TOC

Monday, March 2, 2015

The Laws of Love (new story)

Hi, my name is Debbie and I'm a long time reader, sort of a lurker, I decide to finally write a story of my own. I hope you guys like it! This is just the first part obviously, and I'm hoping to add more parts.  
 
The Laws of Love

One month ago, I sold my first screenplay to Paramount pictures.

It was kind of a big deal. I moved out to Los Angeles 10 years ago, expecting to become a big hot shot screenwriter.  My first screenplay involved what I felt was the romance of the century, and was also a movie that would bring you to tears. Literally, you would've had tears running down your face and soaking your shirt. Except you actually wouldn't, because nobody bought that screenplay.